Tuesday, 23 July 2019
Faavae Narrative introduction
Errrrrrr! I hear something and it sounds so familiar I run away from the sound I get scared i see a little light and it turn bigger and bigger. A vessel comes out of nowhere and it vanished in a second then i call the cops and the cops are washing away the damage and then I ran to my car and locked the doors and then got my camera the record everything and then I went home and i locked all doors and windows it was so scary.
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Hi Faaveafou I'm Lucy and I go to Paroa School.
ReplyDeleteI like this introduction but I think it neads to make a bit more sense. I really like it because it sounds like a story I wrote years ago. To be BTB(Better Than Before) you could edit it. Why were you writing these?
Lucy
Hi i'm Harry from paroa school I really like this introduction and would like to see it turned into a story. but i dont really understand it so maybe you could fix it up a bit other than that its great! Next time could you add a caption so we know why you did this?
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