I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Tena Koe Faavae, This is your classmate Ruqayat. I really liked the reasons you have given us on your argumentation. I have only one question 🤔. Why did you highlight the words yellow? Other then that I really enjoyed your post.
Hi Faavae, I like the way you added nice colors in your presentation. I love the way you backed up your work and why you agreed or disagreed to your statement and why. Also i like the way you said who illustrated it and put your name on it. Kind Re guards Azahlyah
Hey Faavaefou, Im Bella from Paroa School. I really liked how you made a lot of different points and I definitely agree with heaps of them!! How has this affected you and your family? Maybe next time to be BTB (Better Than Before) you could add more full stops, capital letters and correct spelling but other than that its great!! Bella
Hello Faavaefou! Im Eden from Paroa school! My class has two buddies from each school that we do tuhi mai tuhi atu with! You are one of my buddies! So that means i have to comment on your blog for the rest of the year! I think you did a great job on this blog post! Do you have any ideas to make this blog post better then before??? Bye! From Eden!
Tena Koe Faavae, This is your classmate Ruqayat. I really liked the reasons you have given us on your argumentation. I have only one question 🤔. Why did you highlight the words yellow? Other then that I really enjoyed your post.
ReplyDeletebecause it is stylish
DeleteHi Faavae,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you added nice colors in your presentation.
I love the way you backed up your work and why you agreed or disagreed to your statement and why.
Also i like the way you said who illustrated it and put your name on it.
Kind Re guards Azahlyah
thank you Aza your presentation was better
DeleteHey Faavaefou, Im Bella from Paroa School. I really liked how you made a lot of different points and I definitely agree with heaps of them!! How has this affected you and your family? Maybe next time to be BTB (Better Than Before) you could add more full stops, capital letters and correct spelling but other than that its great!!
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Hello Faavaefou! Im Eden from Paroa school! My class has two buddies from each school that we do tuhi mai tuhi atu with! You are one of my buddies! So that means i have to comment on your blog for the rest of the year! I think you did a great job on this blog post! Do you have any ideas to make this blog post better then before??? Bye! From Eden!
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